ext_146780 ([identity profile] starshards.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] cutthroatpixie 2010-04-10 10:34 am (UTC)

As expected, this was an absolute pleasure to read.

I've always been a fan of one- sentence- challenges, because every sentence is guaranteed to make an impact, especially from a writer such as yourself.

As it was, I found myself enjoying the entire thing greatly, and was impressed by your usual fantastic characterisation which was conveyed so well each time in so few words.

I'd have to say that Kiss, Sex, Weakness, and Completion were my favourites.

Kiss because the imagery was so beautiful, Sex because I've never read, or thought about Romano laughing hysterically, but can now absolutely see that, Weakness because I'm a sucker for lunatic!Spain (especially when Romano holds the key to his humanity), and Completion because, bugger me. So gorgeous. Pretty much sums up their entire relationship in a few words, and hnnngh~ <3

So yeah. Good job.
8|d

I apologise for the editing. Apparently I can't coherent good at 11:30 in the morning/ 8|;;

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