http://counterheist.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] counterheist.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] cutthroatpixie 2012-04-11 03:39 am (UTC)

also looks like you didn't close one of the italics tags right, in the middle there

also "He's wondered how it would to watch the person you love" is there a 'be' missing in there?

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